Couldn't stop myself from reviewing this!
It's so perfect! I'm tired right now so I'm not going to go crazy long review but I would suggest trying to get this in a game (it would work perfectly in an RPG or MMO). It really has that video game feel to it. Well, I should stop myself now, great song 10/10 5/5!
Well yes it should be in a game, thats what I used to write when i was in highschool...but sadly none of the games got off the ground. keep listening!
Good job on everything except one thing.
The main lead is just a midi which means you used no skill for the base of the song. The synths sound good and everything else but jacking a midi and calling it your own is not how music should be made, it should be about using your own emotion not someone else's. Anyways other than that it is mastered well everything is clear and all. Could use some more variation and stuff but w/e. Hope to see more (original) stuff from you in the future.
Don't worry man there will be =]
That voice is from the original...
It's a remix -.-
I came
I wrote serious reviews on your 2 other versions of this song so don't expect to get a third serious one. Ur hawt.
You son of a bitch. You request this review be erased and rewrite it. Longer and more serious.
lol Thanks for the review!
Ur hawter
HOLY SHIT
This is amazing dude. At the intro I was like this is good, so it continued on and then the lyrics came in and it was an instant 5. This is just spectacular, I'm sorry that I can't give you any constructive feedback right now because this just song perfect. The only thing I can think of is make the vocals a little louder. Anyways, If you could check out my newest I would appreciate it.
Sup meng
This first buildup is good so far, but I don't like that harsh 3xosc time sounding synth. The buildup is good, lots of automation. The melody is good but I feel like it's missing something it doesn't sound fat enough, you can probably fix this by turning up the thing that says voices or something like that on your vst. The second build up is good but it could use a more epic sounding synth during it to rise tension. The kick sounds a little bit plain from what I can tell maybe layer some together? I don't have much more time but I think i gave you a lot of criticism that will help you. Great song man you have potential.
HEy japetheape...
Well yeah i like some off those deep drum sounds but mabey this one
is not well added in the mix.
Some layers worked really well i think... but it`s a matter of taste wich makes the track complete.
But i will take ur advice in a good way and try to do better next time..
Greetz DJMontana
Hawt :P
I love that clean feeling of it, and the melody is amazing. One suggestion I have is to turn down the first FX. The piano that comes in later on... it's... well... breathtaking :O. Pretty much that whole buildup is perfect, the way you slowly brought in the intruments, and in the right order too. But the drum buildup at the end of the buildup could have used a LP to make t sound better. One last piece of constructive critism that I have for you is that in the last melody you should have made it more powerful by layering the synths. Ultimately you did a great job with this song man. If you wouldn't mind could you stop by and give me a review on my newest song?
Thanks for the advice and the praise! And sure, I'll be sure to check out your newest.
Yay
Such an amazing song from the intro to the well... outro. Good luck with the mac 8 :D. I had fun helping you with this on msn and it turned out execptional from what I hear. YAY THE PHASED ARP :P. Keep up the good work and stay in touch man. Like I said before though, the glitch at the end is amazing.
W00t W00t! Thanks for the help going through it! =D
Damn that's fast!
I've always wanted to make happy hardcore but I cant make it everytime I tried. I love how it sounds with all it's harsh synths and all. The only reason this is 9 out of 10 is because of the intro that was brought in to fast imo, correct me if im wrong it just doesnt seem right for some reason :/. One other reason is the pads didn't seem to fit, don't get me wrong they sounded amazing but I don't think they fit. The lead synth is sooooooooo goodoodododododo I cant even explain how much I love it, can you tell me what you used to make it? Anyways when the more powerful melody came in my heart jumped with epicness. Near the end at the last melody it could have used another patter going to make it more powerful than the first, not needed just a personal preferance. Well there you have my honest opinion, come by and listen to one of my songs if you get the time, I would be honoured *Wink*.
Hhaahahah!! thanks so much! The intro was meant to be that way because its more DJs to mix songs into, i dont know if youve mixed songs or not but thats how we do it with hardcore songs! And as about the pad, ill change it as soon as i get the time! sorry bout that but im busy now!
Thanks ALOT for your review! i'll definitely check your songs right away!
Heyyyyyyy
The intro so far is very touching and woah, this crazy beat just came in, I like that tick kind of sound you put in there, the clap could have had more of a delay on it, the strings go perfectly with this though. It stopped that high string. A little more variation could be used to spice it up. That high string is back and its slower now. It makes me think of climbing a snowy mountain on an epic quest. Very touching piece of music you have here. My two suggestions are vocals, and more variation but the variation wont be needed if you do vocals. Good job man I would appriciate it if you could check out my newest song.
Yeah, thanks.^^
I will check your newest song, of course.
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